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Critique by almapoeta Dec 6, 2012, 4:02:51 PM
Well, here I go...

This picture, in special, gives me a poetic feeling, a romantic vision. She has a gentle look a lovely body, like a muse.
If she was my girl friend, my lover, or even my woman, I certainly would write her pages and pages of passion poems.
I'm a writer and a poet, and I have a site, where I publish all my works.
Actually, I'm planing to write a poem book, wich I also plan to make an"avant-premier" here, in DA.
Your model (this model...) could be my inspiration very, very soon...
That's my critique...

Homero.
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brazzo1954 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
Odddio!!! Rinascimentale, bellissima, merita di essere abbracciata (anche virtualmente) per assaporarne il calore... Grazie al fotografo. [Se posso suggerire una correzione, in prima pagina, "WHICH of my albums do you..." not "What of my albums etc."]
Keep up the good work! Shaking hands. M.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
è così per chi l'inglese lo parla con gli insegnanti, nell'inglese colloquiale si usa WHAT
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biship007 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
a wonderful classic photo...model is curvy and sexy love it
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
thanks!
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biship007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
your welcome
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badraiderfan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastic model and photography!
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
thank you!
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xzendor7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
Stunning Capture, Like The Classic Look Of The Piece - Your Model Is Gorgeous.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
she is!! thanks a lot
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bigbadwolph Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Very good and very thoughtful
Of the many choices you made to accomplish this, through and through-Perfect!
Casting, lighting, set, color, exposure and so much more, Bravo!
Please pass my adoration to your breath taking model!
BigBad
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
i will, thanks!!
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rogeratit Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Wonder of wonders.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
she is!!
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almapoeta Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, here I go...

This picture, in special, gives me a poetic feeling, a romantic vision. She has a gentle sight, a lovely body, like a muse.
If she was my girl friend, my lover, or even my woman, I certainly would write her pages and pages of passion poems.
That's it...

Homero.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
thanks again!
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almapoeta Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ma che bella ragazza... :rose: :heart:
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
verissimo!
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almapoeta Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow:
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
:)
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wickedhousephantasm Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
this is a very lovely sxxxy model.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
she is, absolutely!
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LLPR Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
looks like a dude but great tits nonetheless :XD:
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mrmd53 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great!!
(Except for that flippen DA Logo!!)
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
true :)
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mrmd53 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sorry..
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redig76 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Funbags seems rather disrespectful, she is a remarkably beautiful woman and I feel she should be treated as such.
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4doomsday Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Fun never ending
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
true!
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roni100 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
AMAZING!
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
:) thanks
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Soul-Daemon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
gotta luv a natural and confident woman
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
yeah, dont you? :)
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Snak68 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Stunning model lovely shape
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
so true!
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deviantchickfun Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
wow shes soo pretty and just an awsome photo in general
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
thank you very much!
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MelancholyWord Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
A Beautiful model with a great pose, I found this photo was great, the colour tone was awesome, and i found this photo was sexy and sensual :)
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
thank you, we agree!
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squidflakes Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
You actually want critique?

This image isn't very interesting or well done.

This isn't personal, I'm not saying anything bad or trying to insult the photographer or the model, I happen to think she's very pretty, so take this for what it is; genuine valid critique.

First off, your composition is very boring. The subject is centered and there doesn't seem to be any motivation to do anything other than take a snapshot of a topless girl. There isn't anything interesting in the background. The headboard of the bed draws the eye down and to the sides where we see no space for the model. She is boxed in and it gives a cramped, almost forced look to the pose. The power outlet is also very distracting. The only thing it tells me is that you're in Europe.

Second, the post on the model is very unflattering. I don't know if it is because of the angle the photographer is at, but the model's head looks very small and her lips and legs look very large. If this is how the model is built, then a top down angle would have fooled the eye in to seeing a more balanced image. The pose also seems designed to show off the model's large breasts and draw attention to the panties. This makes the image seem more like amateur porn than a nice pin-up or erotica.

Third, the contrast is terrible, as is the color balance and every other technical detail. The model's skin is pale which requires special attention when shooting against a light colored background. In this image there is very little to define the model. The only areas of contrast are the model's hair and the headboard. If her hair had been down over her shoulder, that would have helped to set off her skin. However, it is more of a technical contrast issue. Is your camera on auto? The EXIF information leads me to believe so. A lower fstop, a slower shutter speed, and a lower ISO would have all contributed to a better technical presentation.

A word on the dark vignette. Don't. It adds nothing to the image. In fact, it only makes the contrast problems worse.

I went and checked out your DA and the pictures you have posted there are far above this one in quality. What happened? I did notice that you tend to prefer a very low contrast style, and that's great, but I really would have liked to see you break that for this shot.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
Fair.
All things you said about pose/location and stuff are due to the location itself, no space at all, we booked this hotel online, it looked great on the website and it was like shit instead.
Yeah, it's all about "nice pin-up/erotica", and that's what the title says, isn't it?
No, it was not in auto, I've never done that, EVER. Give me some days to check on the storage on hard drives and I'll confirm. 95% of times I shoot in M mode, 5% in A mode.
And I like vignettes :)
Thanks anyway, finally a technical comment, I appreciate it!
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squidflakes Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
I've been in some pretty bad hotels, or some awful location, so I understand where you're coming from there. Improvisation is the key in those situations. I've found that hotel sheets, hung from curtain rods or door tops make good backgrounds.

I guessed that it was on auto because the cameras tend to use odd aperture/iso combos. If no one has said it before, use the lowest ISO you can get away with, and try to stick with the traditional film ISO speeds. 100,200,400,600,800, and 1600. You know that when you're using those ISO speeds your light requirements are going to double when going down, or half when going up. (i.e. ISO 200 requires half the light ISO 100 does. ISO 800 requires double the light of ISO 1600, etc)

If you like vignettes, there isn't anything I can do for you. ;)
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011
yeah, i know it all :)
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Jamessparda Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
wow!!! es muy bella...
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
:)
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RobertDobolinaEsq Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011
She's amazingly lovely and it's a solid shot, though I tend to look for, I dunno... a more involved awareness of the play of light and shadow in an image under the artistic nude moniker. Meaning no offense, this feels a little on the workmanlike side of things -- her awesome bod seems to be doing more work here than composition or concept -- and from a glimpse at your gallery it's clear you're capable of much more.

(Oh, and not to be a title Nazi or anything... but it could be the image could do without being framed by the word "funbags." Just a thought.)

Having said all that, I'm still faving because, well, yayyyy tittehs.
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
haahahahahahha
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fabiSm Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
wow! really stunning beauty!
One of your best!
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OttoMarzo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
thanks!
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fabiSm Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
my pleasure!
This one impressed me a lot!
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